智能写作-如何提高essay写作的流畅性?

编辑:pitaya02        日期:2021-01-04

作者安妮也许不是最有名的“勃朗特”,但她在《The Tenant of Wildfell Hall》一书中提到了这一点,其中的租客写道:“在这个不完美的世界上,总有一个‘但是’存在。在学术写作中也是如此,单词“BUT”是组成语法句子的必要 essay连接词(虽然有时可能被滥用),特别是在比较两个观点时更是如此。对诸如“BUT”之类的短句,尽管你不必过分担心这个英文连接词的用法。但有时替代性词汇(例如“however”)会提高 essay的流畅性,因此,我们在这里提供一些“BUT”替代性词汇,供你在写作时使用。火龙果智能写作

用连词代替 BUT

连接词用来连接句子的两部分,例如“but”,“and”和“because”。单词“But”不仅把句子的两部分联系起来,而且还形成对比(例如,“它很好吃,但不够取悦人”)。如果是这样的话,“but”可能会被下面的单词所取代:

- Although, 比如: I love jogging, although my feet hurt afterwards.

- Though, 比如: I haven’t slept for 2 days, though I hope tonight I can rest properly.

- Yet, 比如: It was scary, yet Istill want to go back and try again.火龙果智能写作

用状语来代替 BUT

除连词外,你也可以用副词或副词短语把两个不同的点联系起来。可能最常用的词是“however”,因此我们用它来解释这些词如何取代“but”。

主要区别是:虽然 essay连接词通常是在一句话里连上两个从句,但是副词“however”却是在两个不同的句子里相互对照:火龙果智能写作

- 连词对比: I love jogging, but my feet hurt afterwards.

-状语对比: I love jogging. However, my feet hurt afterwards.

就像你看到的,当你想开始一个新的句子时,使用对比法是很方便的。也就是说,单词“however”也可以出现在句子的中间或者分号后面,比如

It was scary. I still, however, want to go back.

It was scary; however, I still want to go back.

替代 but的其他状语有:

- Nonetheless, 比如: I ran as fast as I could; nonetheless, I haven’t won the race.

- Nevertheless, 比如: It seemed like a really bad plan. Nevertheless, it worked.

- Despite this, 比如: I prepared for the game thoroughly. Despite this, I lost.

- Having said that, 比如: I will never drink again. Having said that, pass me a beer.

还有一点需要说明的是, but的另一个意思是“on the other hand”。然而,通常情况下,只有当引入到" on the one hand"时,才应使用" on the other hand":

On the one hand, I’ve always been dreaming to work for this company. On the other hand, I will have to move to another country and leave my family and friends.

除上述两个主要的词汇转折词外,下面这些是一些常见文章中的转折词,当然,它们也可以替代“BUT”。火龙果智能写作

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下面是 By contrast/in comparison的对比

By contrast with yesterday's cold wind, it seems quite warm today.

In comparison to Canada, France is incredibly small.

使用概览:通常我们将 Bycontrast/in comparison置于句首,并以逗号分隔。在一个句子中使用: in contrast to

The firm lost $5 million this year in contrast to a profit of $7.3 million a year earlier.

02

说回来, Then again

I'd love to buy a new dress. Then again, it’s getting cold outside, so I need to buy new coat more urgently.

使用概览:同样的 then again也需要放在句首,用逗号跟在后面。

03

与 On the contrary相反

This book doesn’t seem boring to me. On the contrary, I think it’s rather interesting.

使用概况:注意,“on the contrary”通常用于口语中,它可以放在句首,但也需要用逗号将其分隔开。火龙果智能写作

04

艾尔泰维里没有

The company will make travel arrangements for you or, alternatively, you can organize your own transport.

使用概览:“Alternatively”可以放在句首,但也需要在后面加上逗号。另外,“alternatively”也可以用在句子里,例如我们的例句。把它放进句子里时,通常是和“or”一起使用,而且这个单词的前后都要加逗号。

05

埃文·though甚至

Even though I've been singing for years, I still get a thrill out of signing in public.

使用概览:当然," eventhough"也可以被放在句首,但也需要用逗号把它分开。

06

despite。

Our journey was a lot of fun, despite the cold weather.

使用概要:“Despite”可以放在句首或句中,它的后面需要连接一个名词或名词短语,但不能连接句子。放在句首时,名词词组后面要用逗号分隔开。

Despite her fear of height, she climbed the mountain.

She climbed the mountain, despite her fear of height.火龙果智能写作

但有一点很重要:当" despite"后面加一个从句时,需要用 despite the fact that这个短语连接起来。

Despite the fact that she was afraid of height, she climbed the mountain.

07

伊恩斯皮特 of尽管如此

In spite of the weather,they went hiking.

用法概述:" In spite of"的用法与" despite"相同。这儿不多说了。

在这篇文章中,如果我们反复使用相同的英文连接词,那就会显得过于枯燥。尝试使用不同的 essay连接词来丰富 essay内容。事实上,在英文 essay中有很多用来替换 but的词组。火龙果智能写作


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